Post by Cookie on Mar 2, 2010 16:58:22 GMT -5
These are spoilers from my fanfiction "Lost & Found" Chapter Five. Don't read if you don't want to be spoiled!
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Spoiler #1:
Marx kicked off the ground, gliding quickly towards Fumu. Kirby pushed Fumu out of the way just in time, but left him to get rammed by Marx. Kirby bounced off the grass before rolling to a stop. Suddenly a few memories flowed back into place: knocking Kirby away to wish to rule Popstar, and a how to use a few powers. Marx paused, a look of growing confusion on his face. He couldn’t remember WHY he wanted to rule Popstar. In is confused daze Kirby recovered and grabbed Fumu’s arm, running from the two. Cookie ran up to Marx. “Marx, are you okay?” she asked. At that Marx snapped out of his daze. “Huh? Wh-what happened?” He said, looking around for Fumu and Kirby. “You got angry and attacked Fumu for calling you crazy. They ran away when you paused,” Cookie answered, looking worried. Marx looked to the grass. He would have hurt them, killed even. Why? Why did he feel such hatred? Cookie blinked in confusion, but then smiled pitifully trying to hide her sadness. “Come on, Marx. We can’t hide anymore, but we can still try to get your memory back,” She said. Marx almost feared what his lost memory might hold, but nodded and slowly started to walk forward, Cookie by his side.
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Spoiler #2:
Suddenly memories flooded back. Marx snarled viciously. He remembered everything now. All the hate and anger pointed to this pink puffball. He wanted revenge. He would have it now. Cookie took a few steps back. She could almost feel the anger coming from him. This wasn’t the brother she once knew. Marx jumped up into the air, spinning a few times before hovering and letting out a burst of maniacal laughter.
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Now if I didn't have writer's block maybe I could get from point A (first spoiler) to point B (second spoiler.) For some reason, the only ideas that come from me are random and never seem to fit. Writer's block could possibly be why I can't think of a plot for this site, too.
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Spoiler #1:
Marx kicked off the ground, gliding quickly towards Fumu. Kirby pushed Fumu out of the way just in time, but left him to get rammed by Marx. Kirby bounced off the grass before rolling to a stop. Suddenly a few memories flowed back into place: knocking Kirby away to wish to rule Popstar, and a how to use a few powers. Marx paused, a look of growing confusion on his face. He couldn’t remember WHY he wanted to rule Popstar. In is confused daze Kirby recovered and grabbed Fumu’s arm, running from the two. Cookie ran up to Marx. “Marx, are you okay?” she asked. At that Marx snapped out of his daze. “Huh? Wh-what happened?” He said, looking around for Fumu and Kirby. “You got angry and attacked Fumu for calling you crazy. They ran away when you paused,” Cookie answered, looking worried. Marx looked to the grass. He would have hurt them, killed even. Why? Why did he feel such hatred? Cookie blinked in confusion, but then smiled pitifully trying to hide her sadness. “Come on, Marx. We can’t hide anymore, but we can still try to get your memory back,” She said. Marx almost feared what his lost memory might hold, but nodded and slowly started to walk forward, Cookie by his side.
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Spoiler #2:
Suddenly memories flooded back. Marx snarled viciously. He remembered everything now. All the hate and anger pointed to this pink puffball. He wanted revenge. He would have it now. Cookie took a few steps back. She could almost feel the anger coming from him. This wasn’t the brother she once knew. Marx jumped up into the air, spinning a few times before hovering and letting out a burst of maniacal laughter.
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Now if I didn't have writer's block maybe I could get from point A (first spoiler) to point B (second spoiler.) For some reason, the only ideas that come from me are random and never seem to fit. Writer's block could possibly be why I can't think of a plot for this site, too.